Technical stuff first: The sun streaming. in I don't think that period belongs there.
The headboard made a cracking sound underneath Goku's fingers. Sanzo grabbed at the younger's wrists, pulling him up onto his knees. The monk slammed into the demon from behind, making Goku gasp as he locked his arms around Sanzo's neck, lyiing his head back on his shoulder. Sanzo attacked his own neck, biting down on the sensitive flesh as Goku began riding Sanzo's cock, his back flush against the blonde's chest.
This whole paragraph I am kind of 'O.o' about, because I'm not sure how anatomically possible it is. How does one bite their own neck? And if Sanzo is taking Goku from behind, then how does Goku wrap his arms around Sanzo's neck? The logistics are confusing, and it takes away from what would otherwise be a HOT scene.
If we are talking about HOT scenes, the Gojyo/Hakkai.. ::dead:: I can't really articulate, but it is so sweet and HOLYOMG sexy and just perfect.
Gah, I loved this. I keep reading it again because it is so nice and p0rny and IC and the pairings are my favorite! ::gives you a million dollars::
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The headboard made a cracking sound underneath Goku's fingers. Sanzo grabbed at the younger's wrists, pulling him up onto his knees. The monk slammed into the demon from behind, making Goku gasp as he locked his arms around Sanzo's neck, lyiing his head back on his shoulder. Sanzo attacked his own neck, biting down on the sensitive flesh as Goku began riding Sanzo's cock, his back flush against the blonde's chest.
This whole paragraph I am kind of 'O.o' about, because I'm not sure how anatomically possible it is. How does one bite their own neck? And if Sanzo is taking Goku from behind, then how does Goku wrap his arms around Sanzo's neck? The logistics are confusing, and it takes away from what would otherwise be a HOT scene.
If we are talking about HOT scenes, the Gojyo/Hakkai.. ::dead:: I can't really articulate, but it is so sweet and HOLYOMG sexy and just perfect.
Gah, I loved this. I keep reading it again because it is so nice and p0rny and IC and the pairings are my favorite! ::gives you a million dollars::