[Note: Sorry for the repost. Let me explain this again.]
Problems noted and fixed. I wrote that part like, last night, at two thirty on a sugar rush.
The own neck thing made sense in my head, but on paper it's stupid. :: laughs :: I'll fix it. And Goku putting his arms around Sanzo's neck: He's reaching behind him to grab Sanzo. Goku's elbows are up more around his ears, so he's arched back to hold Sanzo--which is possible, although it can become quite a strain (especially if you're not particularly flexible) after a while because you back is curved, although it would be easier for Goku since Sanzo is taller than he is.
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Problems noted and fixed. I wrote that part like, last night, at two thirty on a sugar rush.
The own neck thing made sense in my head, but on paper it's stupid. :: laughs :: I'll fix it. And Goku putting his arms around Sanzo's neck: He's reaching behind him to grab Sanzo. Goku's elbows are up more around his ears, so he's arched back to hold Sanzo--which is possible, although it can become quite a strain (especially if you're not particularly flexible) after a while because you back is curved, although it would be easier for Goku since Sanzo is taller than he is.