The use of the mirror (both in the bathroom and in the bedroom) were incredibly sexy! It made me feel like a double voyeur -- us watching them watch themselves. ^_~
And the little things that Gojyo notices about Hakkai and does for Hakkai... noticing that he's been working hard, noticing the change in his weight, noticing the unmade bed... You really give the readers a sense of how deeply in love Gojyo is.
In the beginning of the series, Gojyo didn't care about himself -- he was content just to go through the motions of life... but you've really given the reader the sense that Hakkai has changed all of that.
You treat the reader to all the small adjustments Gojyo has made in his life... which really signifies his shift in attitude about himself -- putting his jacket on the chair, putting clothes in hamper, the careful grooming of himself -- all lead the reader to the same conclusion as Gojyo -- that in Hakkai, he has finally found a home.
And on Hakkai's side... becoming less reserved and more sexually adventurous. It seems like Hakkai and Gojyo have both taken on some of the healthy habits of the other.
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Date: 2007-07-06 02:59 pm (UTC)The use of the mirror (both in the bathroom and in the bedroom) were incredibly sexy! It made me feel like a double voyeur -- us watching them watch themselves. ^_~
And the little things that Gojyo notices about Hakkai and does for Hakkai... noticing that he's been working hard, noticing the change in his weight, noticing the unmade bed... You really give the readers a sense of how deeply in love Gojyo is.
In the beginning of the series, Gojyo didn't care about himself -- he was content just to go through the motions of life... but you've really given the reader the sense that Hakkai has changed all of that.
You treat the reader to all the small adjustments Gojyo has made in his life... which really signifies his shift in attitude about himself -- putting his jacket on the chair, putting clothes in hamper, the careful grooming of himself -- all lead the reader to the same conclusion as Gojyo -- that in Hakkai, he has finally found a home.
And on Hakkai's side... becoming less reserved and more sexually adventurous. It seems like Hakkai and Gojyo have both taken on some of the healthy habits of the other.
Simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing. ^_^