I'm just thrilled you did a sequel to this, but this was fantastic. I love Jack getting all sappy and romantic and the two stories (flashbacks) were wonderful. And that one line..."He makes me afraid to die, because I don't want to wake up and see his tears."...GAH I got teary-eyed! Brilliantly done!
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Date: 2008-04-22 01:39 pm (UTC)