I really loved this. It made cry and smile. The only thing that took me out of that happy place was the line,"Stars explode into giants, then shrink into dwarfs and turn into black holes,". As an aspiring Theoretical Astrophysicist(no joke. I really want to be one) and presently a physics major, that line was glaringly not accurate. A white dwarf will never be a black hole unless it is "swallowed" by one. Stars that become BHs start as massive main sequence stars and after their internal fusion ends the core collapses and the power and heat of said collapse causes the star to explode into a Super Nova and either form a neutron star or (if it was REALLY massive) the gravity on that neutron star will be so great that the star itself would collapse in on itself and create a black hole [with "streaming" or "jetting" out of the poles (but I don't want to bore you with the details of that and then get off on a tangent about Gamma Ray Bursts }=D)]. Also, stars expand into Giants not explode into them....but now I'm being picky.
The only reason I tell you this is because I love your writing so much I don't want someone who has never read your fics before to read this and dismiss you because of said line. But again.....I loved this installment. I think that is what Janto would do if they had the choice.
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Date: 2008-06-05 05:58 am (UTC)The only reason I tell you this is because I love your writing so much I don't want someone who has never read your fics before to read this and dismiss you because of said line. But again.....I loved this installment. I think that is what Janto would do if they had the choice.
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