Doctor Who -- Cleaning Duty

[gracie_musica]

Title: Cleaning Duty
Date Written: 9/29/09
Rating: PG-13/T
Word Count: 100
Fandom: Doctor Who
Disclaimer: Property of their respective owners
Characters/Pairings: Nine, Jack, Rose, slash accordingly.
Spoilers: None
Warnings: Jack being a flirt. No wait, that's expected
Author's Notes: As always, thanks to my wonderful betas katestamps and totally4ryo! Incentive drabble for yamx with the prompt "Jack annoys Nine and has to face the consequences" ($30 bid, Doctor Who lot)


"I told you to lay off."

An amused chuckle. "Don't you worry, Rosie. A little bit of discipline can be fun!"

"That sort of talk's what got you scrubbing the console room with a toothbrush."

"Oh, it's not so bad." Honest, reassuring. "I'm a military man, even if the punishment's a little... retro."

"Why I picked it." Behind you, unexpected, making you jump. "And I figured some time scrubbing on your knees would teach you some humility."

"I do my best work on my knees, Doctor." Full of faux innocence. And promise.

Bite the inside of your cheek to keep from laughing at the Doctor's face.

Comments

[remuslives23.livejournal.com]

The thought of Jack on his knees... ah, you've made my day. :)

[gracie-musica.livejournal.com]

*laughs* Just have that thought rattling around in your head all day. ;)

[luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com]

Very cute.

[gracie-musica.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[thrace-adams.livejournal.com]

OH Jack, he's always got to push doesn't he. And I can just picture him down there scrubbing on his knees while Rose and Nine watch *giggles*

[gracie-musica.livejournal.com]

*laughs* Yes, scrubbing and moving his body just in the right way so his ass shakes just so...

*Gracie has gone to her happy place. Please leave a message after the beep*

[thrace-adams.livejournal.com]

*Thrace has joined Gracie in her happy place...please check back later...*

[rosy5000.livejournal.com]

Hmmm... is Jack wearing the tight jeans as he's on his knees scrubbing? *looks for video camera*

Maybe someone needs to suggest this punishment to Ianto for Jack when he misbehaves. ;D

[gracie-musica.livejournal.com]

Jack is wearing the tight jeans. Although if you ask him nicely, I'm sure he'll do it in short shorts.

Or, you know, naked. Just give him the right incentive.

[owensheart.livejournal.com]

*giggle* brilliant.

Oh to see Nine's face!

[gracie-musica.livejournal.com]

*giggles* There was probably lots of eye rolling, some silly grinning, and possibly a blush. ;)

[gingerlr.livejournal.com]

*grins*

Picturing Jack on his knees...

*very big grin*

[gracie-musica.livejournal.com]

That seems to be the general consensus: "yummy Jack on his knees."

Ianto should do this. Or Tosh should make them do this. *tries to Jedi Mind Trick your muses into doing this*

[yamx]

You already know how much I love this drabble. It's so funny, and you captured the characters so perfectly. I love Jack, who cheerfully accepts the punishment but is not in the least embarrassed or humiliated, and the Doctor, clearly wanting to teach him a lesson, but with fondness, not malice. *g* Very well done!

[gracie-musica.livejournal.com]

*blush* I am so, so glad that you liked it!

I can see Nine playing on the 'army man' persona Jack had adopted and issuing just punishment; and also letting Jack slide if he quits halfway through. And Jack's totally into it, it's probably just one big roleplaying game to him. *laughs*

[yamx]

Yes, I think they're both playing to a degree, though I'm sure Jack also heard whatever the underlying lesson was. :)

[hab318princess.livejournal.com]

wonderful

[gracie-musica.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much sweetheart!

[wendymr.livejournal.com]

Ooh, this is gorgeous! Funny and sexy, with such strong overtones of the Doctor's sense of humour. He's not really punishing Jack - he'd do something far worse than that if he really intended to punish him. And I bet he's grinning inside at this:

"I do my best work on my knees, Doctor." Full of faux innocence. And promise.

Any chance of the sequel in which Jack proves he's as good as his word? I'm sure Rose would love to be a witness! *g*

[gracie-musica.livejournal.com]

*blush* Oh, thank you so much! It was actually rather fun because (as you probably know/can tell) I'm a Torchwood/Janto fangirl at heart so it was really fun to write something non-TW/Janto-y.

Sequel... Mmm. Who knows? We'll have to see what happens.

[cjharknessgirl.livejournal.com]

I is a bad commentor. I read this before my computer went out me last week and thought I commented. And then I was looking at my flist and realised I hadn't. Sorry about that!

This was too funny. *giggles* And Jack scrubbing the floors on his knees gives me a nice mental image. I'm not sure it was much of a punishment, since its probably a game to Jack but I love it! *goes to happy place*

[gracie-musica.livejournal.com]

If you're a bad commentor, I'm a God-awful reader and replyer. ;)

And yes, punishment for most is foreplay for Jack. *LAUGHS*