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gracie_musicaTitle: Day of Rest
Author: Gracelyn Musica
Date Written: 8/15/05
Word Count: 1127
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Sanzo/Goku; Hakkai/Gojyo
Notes: Dedicated to![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
ohajiki, who thinks she can't write (WTF, mate?!) And it ended up being too long for ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
1000_miles_west, so... yeah.
The sun streaming in through the horizontal blinds is what awoke Hakkai. He could feel the slight tingle of the sun on his face, smiling slightly as he snuggled deeper into Gojyo's embrace. The half breed had an arm around his waist, spooning him close to naked tanned flesh, his breath fanning across the back of his neck, tickling the hairs on his skin. Hakkai laced his fingers through Gojyo's, smiling at the empty, made bed across from them. Why Sanzo didn't pay the extra ten bucks for a queen bed for them Hakkai didn't understand, nor did he care; he liked cramming into a small bed with his lover. The guaranteed intimacy of simply sleeping in another's arms was bliss, carnal urges aside.
He felt Gojyo's breathing speed up and grow uneven, signaling that the redhead was awake. He could feel the other man's growing morning erection digging into his rear.
"Good morning, Gojyo," Hakkai murmured as soft lips pressed against the sensitive skin under his ear.
Gojyo murmured an unintelligible reply, callused fingers tracing the scar on Hakkai's stomach.
"We should get up," Hakkai continued, squirming under his lover's touch. "Sanzo'll be mad if we're late."
"Eh, Sanzo can go fuck himself," Gojyo replied, rolling Hakkai onto his back and covering the demon with his body. "I want my good morning kiss."
Hakkai smiled, wrapping his arms around Gojyo's neck and pulling him down for a long, leisurely kiss.
---
Sanzo awoke with a monkey wrapped around his lower body. Goku had his arms wrapped around his lower hips, a brunette head resting on his belly, tendrils of bedhead hair tickling his chest. He could feel the coolness of the diadem pressing against his skin, and he knew that there was probably a faint red imprint on his stomach.
He idly ran long tobacco-stained fingers through Goku's hair, making it stand on end even more. Goku leaned up into the touch in his slumber, and Sanzo allowed himself a small smile. His younger charge always insisted on sleeping with Sanzo when they shared a room, and he always ended up tangled around Sanzo, clutching onto the priest as if he was afraid the man would disappear in his sleep.
It had been like that since their first night together, when Sanzo had freed the demon. However, when Goku had turned what they all guessed to be 18, their relationship had turned sexual. Sanzo deeply cared for the boy, more than he ever thought he'd care for anyone ever again, and it scared him shitless.
He'd die before he'd admit it aloud, but he knew Goku knew. And that was enough for both of them.
His smile lingered as sleep-blurred golden eyes opened to look up at him.
"Mmm, you're in a good mood if you're allowing me to see you smile," Goku said, kissing the pale skin of his stomach.
"Shut up, monkey."
White teeth flashed at Sanzo. "Now that's the man I know," Goku teased, crawling kisses up a well-muscled chest.
---
Gojyo nuzzled at Hakkai's neck as he gently rocked into the brunette beneath him. He could feel Hakkai's long fingers moving up and down his spine, his face pressed into the crook of his neck as the two slowly made love. The two were still half asleep and relishing more in the sensual closeness than the sexual satisfaction.
The redhead moved one hand up to cradle the back of Hakkai's head, watching the demon tip his head back into his hand, watching the look of peaceful bliss on his lover's face.
Hakkai smiled up at him, his eyes half-shut from warm flooding pleasure. He whispered Gojyo's name, and pulled Gojyo down for another kiss, moaning into the taller man's mouth. Tongues entwined amid short gasps and moans.
Underneath him, Hakkai arched up into Gojyo's body, breaking their kiss as his head falling back into the pillows. Gojyo, in turn, propped himself up above his bunette lover and slammed into him without warning, nailing his prostate with practiced ease.
Hakkai gasped, nails biting into tanned shoulders as slender legs tightned around Gojyo's waist. Gojyo grinned in satisfaction at his lover's reaction, returning back to the slow, gentle strokes of previous.
"Tease," Hakkai managed to groan out, pulling Gojyo down for another kiss.
---
The headboard made a cracking sound underneath Goku's fingers. Sanzo grabbed at the younger's wrists, pulling him up onto his knees. The monk slammed into the demon from behind, making Goku gasp as he locked his arms around Sanzo's neck, laying his head back on the priest's shoulder. Sanzo attacked his neck, biting down on the sensitive flesh as Goku began riding Sanzo's cock, his back flush against the blonde's chest.
Sweat beaded on Goku's tanned skin, trickling down his body in winding paths and pooling in indentions on his body. Everything about Sanzo flooded Goku's senses: golden sweat-soaked tendrils danced across the side of his face, sticking to his skin; the scent of tobacco and gunpowder and sweat and simply Sanzo made his head spin, heady and absolutely wonderful; having Sanzo take him--this time--branding his body with his marks, his scent, making him HIS, Sanzo's, and no one else's.
Sanzo's hands slid down Goku's hips, holding him steady as he drove himself into the brunette's willing body. Long fingers wrapped around Goku's erection, stroking him, using his own sweat and precum. Short, chewed off fingernails scraped along pale skin, leaving livid red lines along his neck and back.
"Sanzo-!"
"Shut up," Sanzo spit out, pulling a handful of hair back to grind his mouth to Goku's.
---
"I am so not getting out of bed," Gojyo declared, pressing kisses onto Hakkai's ear.
"Oh?" Hakkai teased, playing with the long crimson strands on his lover's back.
A lecherous smirk appeared on the scarred tan face. "Nope, I've finally got you in a bed to myself, I'm gonna fuck you into it all day."
Hakkai closed his eyes and buried his face into Gojyo's shoulder.
---
"Sanzo?"
Sanzo 'hmned', on his back with a cigarette between his lips. He could feel Goku shifting next to him, crossing his arms on the priest's pale chest, the mental image adding Goku's head lying on his forearm.
The cigarette was taken out of his mouth and Sanzo opened one violet eye to watch his younger lover smoke for a few moments, both of them entranced with the blue-grey smoke from the cancer stick.
Goku sprang to life, pressing a smoky kiss to Sanzo's lips and slipping the cigarette beetween pale pink lips. "I'm STARVING!" Goku declared, rolling out from under the covers and walking naked across the room, stretching his muscles. "Heeeeeeeey, Sanzo, can we order room service? Can we?"
Sanzo pressed a hand to his forehead and sighed.
Author: Gracelyn Musica
Date Written: 8/15/05
Word Count: 1127
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Sanzo/Goku; Hakkai/Gojyo
Notes: Dedicated to
ohajiki, who thinks she can't write (WTF, mate?!) And it ended up being too long for 1000_miles_west, so... yeah.The sun streaming in through the horizontal blinds is what awoke Hakkai. He could feel the slight tingle of the sun on his face, smiling slightly as he snuggled deeper into Gojyo's embrace. The half breed had an arm around his waist, spooning him close to naked tanned flesh, his breath fanning across the back of his neck, tickling the hairs on his skin. Hakkai laced his fingers through Gojyo's, smiling at the empty, made bed across from them. Why Sanzo didn't pay the extra ten bucks for a queen bed for them Hakkai didn't understand, nor did he care; he liked cramming into a small bed with his lover. The guaranteed intimacy of simply sleeping in another's arms was bliss, carnal urges aside.
He felt Gojyo's breathing speed up and grow uneven, signaling that the redhead was awake. He could feel the other man's growing morning erection digging into his rear.
"Good morning, Gojyo," Hakkai murmured as soft lips pressed against the sensitive skin under his ear.
Gojyo murmured an unintelligible reply, callused fingers tracing the scar on Hakkai's stomach.
"We should get up," Hakkai continued, squirming under his lover's touch. "Sanzo'll be mad if we're late."
"Eh, Sanzo can go fuck himself," Gojyo replied, rolling Hakkai onto his back and covering the demon with his body. "I want my good morning kiss."
Hakkai smiled, wrapping his arms around Gojyo's neck and pulling him down for a long, leisurely kiss.
---
Sanzo awoke with a monkey wrapped around his lower body. Goku had his arms wrapped around his lower hips, a brunette head resting on his belly, tendrils of bedhead hair tickling his chest. He could feel the coolness of the diadem pressing against his skin, and he knew that there was probably a faint red imprint on his stomach.
He idly ran long tobacco-stained fingers through Goku's hair, making it stand on end even more. Goku leaned up into the touch in his slumber, and Sanzo allowed himself a small smile. His younger charge always insisted on sleeping with Sanzo when they shared a room, and he always ended up tangled around Sanzo, clutching onto the priest as if he was afraid the man would disappear in his sleep.
It had been like that since their first night together, when Sanzo had freed the demon. However, when Goku had turned what they all guessed to be 18, their relationship had turned sexual. Sanzo deeply cared for the boy, more than he ever thought he'd care for anyone ever again, and it scared him shitless.
He'd die before he'd admit it aloud, but he knew Goku knew. And that was enough for both of them.
His smile lingered as sleep-blurred golden eyes opened to look up at him.
"Mmm, you're in a good mood if you're allowing me to see you smile," Goku said, kissing the pale skin of his stomach.
"Shut up, monkey."
White teeth flashed at Sanzo. "Now that's the man I know," Goku teased, crawling kisses up a well-muscled chest.
---
Gojyo nuzzled at Hakkai's neck as he gently rocked into the brunette beneath him. He could feel Hakkai's long fingers moving up and down his spine, his face pressed into the crook of his neck as the two slowly made love. The two were still half asleep and relishing more in the sensual closeness than the sexual satisfaction.
The redhead moved one hand up to cradle the back of Hakkai's head, watching the demon tip his head back into his hand, watching the look of peaceful bliss on his lover's face.
Hakkai smiled up at him, his eyes half-shut from warm flooding pleasure. He whispered Gojyo's name, and pulled Gojyo down for another kiss, moaning into the taller man's mouth. Tongues entwined amid short gasps and moans.
Underneath him, Hakkai arched up into Gojyo's body, breaking their kiss as his head falling back into the pillows. Gojyo, in turn, propped himself up above his bunette lover and slammed into him without warning, nailing his prostate with practiced ease.
Hakkai gasped, nails biting into tanned shoulders as slender legs tightned around Gojyo's waist. Gojyo grinned in satisfaction at his lover's reaction, returning back to the slow, gentle strokes of previous.
"Tease," Hakkai managed to groan out, pulling Gojyo down for another kiss.
---
The headboard made a cracking sound underneath Goku's fingers. Sanzo grabbed at the younger's wrists, pulling him up onto his knees. The monk slammed into the demon from behind, making Goku gasp as he locked his arms around Sanzo's neck, laying his head back on the priest's shoulder. Sanzo attacked his neck, biting down on the sensitive flesh as Goku began riding Sanzo's cock, his back flush against the blonde's chest.
Sweat beaded on Goku's tanned skin, trickling down his body in winding paths and pooling in indentions on his body. Everything about Sanzo flooded Goku's senses: golden sweat-soaked tendrils danced across the side of his face, sticking to his skin; the scent of tobacco and gunpowder and sweat and simply Sanzo made his head spin, heady and absolutely wonderful; having Sanzo take him--this time--branding his body with his marks, his scent, making him HIS, Sanzo's, and no one else's.
Sanzo's hands slid down Goku's hips, holding him steady as he drove himself into the brunette's willing body. Long fingers wrapped around Goku's erection, stroking him, using his own sweat and precum. Short, chewed off fingernails scraped along pale skin, leaving livid red lines along his neck and back.
"Sanzo-!"
"Shut up," Sanzo spit out, pulling a handful of hair back to grind his mouth to Goku's.
---
"I am so not getting out of bed," Gojyo declared, pressing kisses onto Hakkai's ear.
"Oh?" Hakkai teased, playing with the long crimson strands on his lover's back.
A lecherous smirk appeared on the scarred tan face. "Nope, I've finally got you in a bed to myself, I'm gonna fuck you into it all day."
Hakkai closed his eyes and buried his face into Gojyo's shoulder.
---
"Sanzo?"
Sanzo 'hmned', on his back with a cigarette between his lips. He could feel Goku shifting next to him, crossing his arms on the priest's pale chest, the mental image adding Goku's head lying on his forearm.
The cigarette was taken out of his mouth and Sanzo opened one violet eye to watch his younger lover smoke for a few moments, both of them entranced with the blue-grey smoke from the cancer stick.
Goku sprang to life, pressing a smoky kiss to Sanzo's lips and slipping the cigarette beetween pale pink lips. "I'm STARVING!" Goku declared, rolling out from under the covers and walking naked across the room, stretching his muscles. "Heeeeeeeey, Sanzo, can we order room service? Can we?"
Sanzo pressed a hand to his forehead and sighed.
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Date: 2005-08-16 03:09 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2005-08-16 05:14 am (UTC)The headboard made a cracking sound underneath Goku's fingers. Sanzo grabbed at the younger's wrists, pulling him up onto his knees. The monk slammed into the demon from behind, making Goku gasp as he locked his arms around Sanzo's neck, lyiing his head back on his shoulder. Sanzo attacked his own neck, biting down on the sensitive flesh as Goku began riding Sanzo's cock, his back flush against the blonde's chest.
This whole paragraph I am kind of 'O.o' about, because I'm not sure how anatomically possible it is. How does one bite their own neck? And if Sanzo is taking Goku from behind, then how does Goku wrap his arms around Sanzo's neck? The logistics are confusing, and it takes away from what would otherwise be a HOT scene.
If we are talking about HOT scenes, the Gojyo/Hakkai.. ::dead:: I can't really articulate, but it is so sweet and HOLYOMG sexy and just perfect.
Gah, I loved this. I keep reading it again because it is so nice and p0rny and IC and the pairings are my favorite! ::gives you a million dollars::
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Date: 2005-08-16 05:16 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-08-16 05:53 am (UTC)Problems noted and fixed. I wrote that part like, last night, at two thirty on a sugar rush.
The own neck thing made sense in my head, but on paper it's stupid. :: laughs :: I'll fix it. And Goku putting his arms around Sanzo's neck: He's reaching behind him to grab Sanzo. Goku's elbows are up more around his ears, so he's arched back to hold Sanzo--which is possible, although it can become quite a strain (especially if you're not particularly flexible) after a while because you back is curved, although it would be easier for Goku since Sanzo is taller than he is.
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Date: 2005-08-17 08:20 am (UTC)::Read again, drools::
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Date: 2005-08-16 05:59 am (UTC)*uses your username you.. you.. *sporfle*
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Date: 2005-08-16 06:03 am (UTC)This is why my little brother's on myspace.
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Date: 2005-08-16 08:16 am (UTC)@?XX*&&£$£~~##*&^%$£"£$
stunned beyond words ... utterly stunned. This is one of the nicest things ever done for me.
Personalised porn ... ^_^ whatta present!!
@_@ what gave you the impression I could write???
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Date: 2005-08-16 12:33 pm (UTC)Yup. Sometimes you just need smut. I'm glad you liked it so much. ^__^ That makes me very happy.
what gave you the impression I could write???
Um... The fanfics of yours that I have bookmarked/saved on my hard drive? ^_____^ And I'm not the only one.
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Date: 2005-08-16 02:31 pm (UTC)skib*&^%wasabi^&%$fufu£$^&*()*&^carcar%$£%sankyu
*-*
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Date: 2005-08-16 02:41 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-07-06 03:22 pm (UTC)I love how expertly you interwine the physical and emotional aspects of love-making.
Honestly, I am often a little wary to read fics with full on love scenes because a lot of writers skip past the build up and go straight for the sex... then when they finally get to the sex, it reads like a technical manual. Insert Tab A into Slot B.
Your love scenes are exactly that: love scenes. The physical pleasure is subtly, intricately and expertly interlaced with the emotions behind them.
You do such a wonderful job leading the readers to feel the sensual joy in the act of love-making... It's truly wonderful.
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Date: 2007-07-08 07:36 am (UTC)This one is one of my downright favorites. I thoughly enjoyed writing it.
I like to see this one as a look at a still-new relationship (Sanzo and Goku's) and an older, more matture relationship (Hakkai and Gojyo's). Of course, you also have to take into account Sanzo's personality. He keeps everyone at a distance, and a regular lover wouldn't be any different. Goku just... gets inside people.
Gojyo, to quote
And of course, the slower, the longer they have, right?
Have you tried AFF.N? They have some really good smutfics over there--of course, you also have the bad ones, but you can usually sense those from just the previews. Here's one great one that every 58 fan needs to read: http://anime.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=31405
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Date: 2007-07-10 03:22 am (UTC)I found this piece to be particular hot and sensual. The image of Hakkai and Gojyo engaged in slow, tender lovemaking just melts me into a big pile of goo. I really can see them as a very sensual couple once they got into an establish relationship. I think both of them have a romantic side.
And these two simply enjoy each other's company so much as friends that I imagine that quality would be reflected in their lovemaking. Just a tender moment to relish in the simple joy of each other's presence.
Oh, I ♥ RAHO! ^_^
I have to admit that I have been really impressed by the Saiyuki fandom in general... especially 58 writers. Compared to other fandoms (and even other pairings) I have read, 58 fics tend to be fairly high quality.
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Date: 2007-07-10 04:29 am (UTC)Those authors tend to... detract from my experience of those fics. But on the whole, yes, the fandom has an amazing quality of authors.
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Date: 2007-07-10 04:39 am (UTC)I am new to fan fiction writing myself (READ: I suck ^_^;;) so when I get a comment on something I've written -- I feel really encouraged... and it also gives me a chance to make a new friend.
I try to pass that encouragement on. If I read a fic written by someone who is new to fan fiction writing, I leave a comment -- even if just to offer my support and encouragement and thank them for their efforts.
If I enjoy an author's work a lot (like yours) --I feel compelled to let that author know that I appreciate their hard work and admire their talent. Afterall, I imagine that even the best authors can feel discouraged from time to time.
That being said, there have been many times when I have written a review (or in some cases, *many* reviews) and never so much as an acknowledgement from the author... It's discouraging. I understand that everyone has a life and we are all busy, but I think a simple acknowledgement like "Thanks for commenting" would be polite if the reader takes the time to write a thoughtful review.
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Date: 2007-07-10 05:13 am (UTC)It's the ones where--for instance--you get someone who replies to something you really put some heart and soul into--with "Fuck you, die bitch". Or, for insance, this one, where
And don't worry about just starting out. Everyone's bad when they start (I was writing major mary sues when I first started), but practice makes perfect. you just have to get into your niche. You'll find it. ^_____^
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Date: 2007-07-10 05:27 am (UTC)I do hope you'll consider joining
Yeah -- I appreciate con crit -- but random flames and rudeness is just uncalled for.
8^( That's very sad. 8^( It must have been hard on her. 8^(
Creative writing is a struggle for me... but I've been very fortunate to have been friended by a lot of kind people. My f-list has been a huge encouragement to me... so I have been trying hard to improve. It's tough though... nothing ever sounds right on paper when I write it. 8^(
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Date: 2007-07-10 05:36 am (UTC)And I'll join by the end of the week. ^__^
nothing ever sounds right on paper when I write it. 8^(
Try reading it aloud, or saying it as you write. That always helps me (although when I write in public, people think I'm skitso).
Also, great betas always help. ^__^
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Date: 2007-07-10 05:48 am (UTC)I find that some of the more well-known writers can be a bit... um... aloof. But there are also a good number of really talented established authors, like yourself,
I do have an awesome beta. She's smart, kind, a wonderful person and (like yourself) a very talented writer, but I'm afraid that there's only so much she can do. No one can take chicken scratch and turn it into Shakespeare. *sigh*
I also beta for her... and that's been fun... but she is so talented that I never feel like I help her very much. *shrugs* But still, I enjoy the beta process -- and she seems to enjoy it too -- so it works for us. *^_^*
Reading it aloud? Hmmm... you know, I've never tried that before. I'll try it on the next fic I write. ^_^ Thanks!
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Date: 2007-07-10 07:01 am (UTC)I love having betas, they're wonderful if you find a good one. I usually go through with my red marker of doom 'cause I'm a grammar nazi. Which is why people who I beta for love me. *laughs*
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Date: 2007-07-11 03:41 am (UTC)*squints to see you up on that high high pedestal*
Well, meeting strong writers who have been in the fandom a while is one of the things I like about LJ. I find that interacting with good writers is an enjoyable way to improve my writing. Plus it is just fun to talk to someone who has a common interest.
Ooooo! Red pen of DOOM! *shiver*
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Date: 2008-02-06 07:34 pm (UTC)I liked the comparison and contrast between the two couples that you presented here. And, I really liked the idea of them having a lazy day to just enjoy one another. Very nicely done, and it was so very IC. It was hot, and sensual, but not overly so that it distracted what (I'm gathering) you're trying to portray. Very nicely done.
You must be the Gracie that I hear about from
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Date: 2008-02-07 05:14 am (UTC)I really liked writing it, as a comparison for the two pairings as well as where they are in their relationships: Goku and Sanzo's is still new so the sex is fueled with white-hot lust, while Gojyo and Hakkai have been lovers for years and know each other -- and each other's bodies -- well enough to have a slow lovemaking session full of love and affection.
And then, of course, Goku's the only one who can make Sanzo come completely and utterly undone, while Gojyo's the only one who's allowed to see Hakkai with his guard completely down.
Yes, that's me. *blush* And you're welcome to add me. I also have a FF.N and an AFF.N account.
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Date: 2008-02-07 10:54 pm (UTC)I really liked the way you portrayed them, seriously. *was re-reading* It's an interesting way to view them and I totally agree with you.
AND ANOTHER THING I AGREE ABOUT! *squee* Goku is the only person that Sanzo allows to see past the mask, even if he still keeps it firmly in place while dealing with him. I hope that makes sense. *_* That's one of the reasons I love 393 and 585 so much. The dynamics are so vastly different that it makes them an interesting contrast.
Yay! And I have read your stuff before on ff...I was reading your drabbles once upon a time. I think I'll have to go and catch up on more of your stuff! Thanks!
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Date: 2008-02-08 03:17 am (UTC)Well, it's all over there, promise! ^__^